Note: In what follows, I will be assuming that your subscripted "2" is meant to be a superscripted exponent.
How did you get that 16n<sup>2</sup> + 8n + 1 equalled (16n<sup>2</sup> + 4n)(2n + 1)? You should be able to see, even without multiplying things out, that your factors will produce a cubic, which isn't what you started with:
. . . . .(16n<sup>2</sup> + 4n)(2n + 1)
. . . . .= (16n<sup>2</sup>)(2n) + (16n<sup>2</sup>)(1) + (4n)(2n) + (4n)(1)
. . . . .=32n<sup>3</sup> + 24n<sup>2</sup> + 4n
Please follow the instructions that were provided earlier: multiply out (4n + 1)<sup>2</sup>, and see what you get.
Eliz.