All of your work and methods seem fine and the checking process worked as intended. I just have two small points that might seem like I'm nitpicking, but as you go forward into harder math, noting these things will help you a lot. First, your equation needs some parentheses, to note which elements are under the radical. For instance, these two expressions produce totally different answers:
³√(68-4) = ³√(64) = 4
³√68 - 4 = ³√(68) - 4 ~ 0.0816...
In this case, I could easily tell from the context of your workings that the minus four was also meant to be under the radical, but it's not always clear. Secondly, I'd leave your answer in fraction form rather than rounding. 68/3 is really close to 22.67, but just enough off that some error crept in when you checked your answer. If you'd left it as 68/3, it would have worked out much nicer:
2*³√(3[68/3]-4)+1=9
2*³√(68-4)+1=9
...and so on