The first three lines are good; you are rightly taking it more slowly. But in the last line you have prematurely started differentiating arguments, which is utterly wrong.
Drop that line, and continue expanding the log just as you did originally! Use the quotient property, the product property, and so on, expanding step by step, and when it is fully expanded, then take the derivative of each side.
Incidentally, it helps to keep in mind the reason for what you are doing: taking the log and expanding fully changes products and quotients to sums and differences, which are far easier to differentiate. So take it as far as you can, to save yourself as much work as possible.