Your work is correct in what it means; it isn't methods that are wrong. All that Jomo is complaining about (I think) is that you didn't put parentheses where needed in order for your written work to mean what you mean. That is a problem in communicating, though it evidently is not a problem in your doing the work. But it's important to communicate correctly both to others who are trying to follow your work, and also to yourself, if, say, you come back to check it and forget what you meant. So it's important to pay attention to details.
But I would emphasize the correctness of your work before pointing out where you can improve.